writing hail storm and brain storm

 This week we have been doing planing and using brain storm. This is a brain storm about a hail storm that was at are school last month. 

Brainstorm 

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The rain was as loud as a zoo The hail storm was as big as the sea	The kids are like a lion in a zoo The kids are running around like herdless chickens.	You can hear the trash yelling as it rolls across the ground

One day at Rawhiti school it was a big hail storm or of the kids were running around the school dancing in

the run. I can hear the hail hitting the ground fearlessly and you can hear the trash yelling as it rolls across

the ground. . The rain was getting louder and louder  like a flock of seagulls. It was so cool to see hail on the ground. People started to throw hail balls at each other. When the hail

storm stopped. It was time to go back to class or for the kids that went outside in the rain as

 cold as Antarctica.